Hi y’all. Just looking for a bit of feedback. If you read this on SufficientVelocity, please reply in the discussion thread. If you read it on the main site, please reply as a comment. In either case, if you are uncomfortable with others viewing your reply you can send it as an email to me at firstname.lastname@example.org .
Question 1: Please rank point of views, from most to least favorite (that is, put 1 and other low numbers by the POV’s you’d prefer to see more of)
F: 3rd Person (like the Strongboat arc)
G: Adversary (Fidel/Overseer arcs)
Question 2: Please indicate your preference regarding the story’s current balance of background exposition vs. plot movement. I’ve had some folks indicate that they don’t need to see quite so much discussion of why characters aren’t undertaking alternate plans, and others have given me the opposite feedback.
Question 3: Please let me know how you found out about TFD. (Top web fiction, link on slatestarcodex open threads, other…?)
Question 4: Just generally anything else you want to let me know. If there is any feedback you’d like to send me that doesn’t fit into one of those categories feel free to write it up. I am always eager to see what people think of my work.
Thanks a lot for answering, if you do, and for reading regardless of whether you respond or not. I was able to get a one update buffer, so hopefully we won’t be missing any more wednesday story updates.